You know how to make Web pages with text. You know how to make them look good, with colors, fonts, and other things.
But what about the words themselves? That’s what this lesson is about.
By the end of this lesson, you should:
Much of the information on a Web site is in text. Some is in images; we’ll talk about that later. But getting the text right is important.
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You’re writing for two stakeholders:
Most users don’t “surf.” They spend time on a site because it helps them. Find a product, learn about a band, laugh at fails.
Owners spend money on a site because they have information they want users to see. Stuff on sale, tips on playing a game, when the book club meets.
The interests of users and owners may conflict. Say there’s a page about an MP3 player. Some users want just the basic facts about the product. Some owners want users to read a thousand words on why this is the best MP3 player ever.
On the Web, users are in control. If they don’t want to read a thousand words? They go to another Web site.
Site owners are not in control of user’s time. Someone will keep reading a Web page only if s/he keeps getting value from doing that.
Part of the writer’s job is to write for users, while still conveying the owners’ key messages.
Here are some guidelines for writing Web text.
Drop as many words as you can. Use simple words. Write “use simple words,” not “Avoid unnecessary linguistic complexity in the presentation of textual information.”
Keep sentences and paragraphs short.
Sentences have subjects and objects. Here’s a sentence:
The dog liked the bone.
The dog is the subject, the thing the sentence is about. The bone is the object.
Active voice means the subject comes first in the sentence, as in “The dog liked the bone.” Passive voice puts the object first:
The bone was liked by the dog.
Here’s another sentence pair:
Head bangers like this product.
This product is liked by head bangers.
You can use passive voice sometimes, but not a whole page of it. It’s harder to read, because your brain has to do more work to figure out what a passive voice sentence means.
Here’s some happy talk:
Welcome! And best wishes from everyone at X Corp.! We’re glad you’re here at our site. Thank you for coming. We value you, and just want the opportunity to make your life better, with our fine line of products. They’re great! And if you use them, you’ll be great, too! Everyone will like you. We’ll like you, and be your best friend forever. You’re in for a great experience on our site. Have a nice time!
It doesn’t help the user much.
Here’s the happy talk from the CoreDogs home page:
Figure 1. CoreDogs home page happy talk
This is the only thing on the page that isn’t about CoreDogs. I could get rid of it, but that dog is very cute.
Here’s the search field on this page:
Figure 2. Search form
You know how to use this. No instructions needed.
The tree menus:
Figure 3. Tree menus
You already know what the + and – do.
Search and the tree menu don’t need instructions because you’ve seen them before. When there’s something different on your site, you might need to add instructions.
But don’t push instructions on the user. Let the user decide whether to see them. Here’s a widget you’ve seen on the exercise pages:
Figure 4. Public widget
To get help, click on the help dog – but you decide whether you want it.
CoreDogs has a help section section. It isn’t forced on you. You decide whether you want to use it.
Write so users can quickly look over the page, without having to read it all.
Make lists look like lists, rather than putting them in text.
Here is a list:
There is the blue thing. And then the red thing. The red thing is way cool! Really, it is. Third, there’s the brown thing. Last, but not least, the green thing.
Do this instead:
Use it. People like it better.
Make the text color easy to read on the background color.
Older people have trouble with small font sizes. I use 14px as a rule. Larger for headings, of course.
Jakob Nielsen has a well-regarded piece on writing for the Web.
Julie Meloni wrote a short article on writing for the Web. It’s based on Nielsen’s work.
You are writing for site users and owners, but the users come first.
Guidelines for Web writing:
Time to work on your eMe site.